Scheduling:

Chloe was responsible for scripting out our film, and here is the prologue voice over that she has come up with for our film:

("Script" copied off from Chloe's blog - http://chloeastleyasmedia.blogspot.com/2011/11/prologue-voice-over.html)

The prologue is a voice over that will be non diagetic voice in the background of the scenes. We decided to use this because it adds another layer to the opening scene and applies the enigma code as you wonder why the voice over is needed and what relevance it will have to the film.

Voice over: draft one

"I'd always been a good girl. Never said a bad word, I was always kind...I had never dared to bend the rules, let alone break them. But in every good girl, there is always that alluring temptation to do something reckless. A good girl may wonder what it would be like...to do what you please, and not think about the consequences. I couldn't help my self...and soon enough the good girl in me was non existent and in its place...was a demon with no conscience."

Group thoughts: We liked it as a group as we thought it captured the essence of the film and applied an enigma code as in the dialogue it is not clear what she has done thats bad but we know she has turned bad.
- To improve it: we think that it should be slightly shorter.

Voice over: draft two

"I'd always been a good girl. I had never dared to bend the rules, let alone break them. But in every good girl, there is always that alluring temptation to do something reckless. A good girl may wonder what it would be like to do what you please, and not think about the consequences. I couldn't help my self...and soon enough the good girl in me was non existent and in its place...was a demon with no conscience."

Group thoughts:
- As we have just took out a sentence we still like this newer version

Final voice over:
"I'd always been a good girl. I had never dared to bend the rules, let alone break them. But in every good girl, there is always that alluring temptation to do something reckless. A good girl may wonder what it would be like to do what you please, and not think about the consequences. I couldn't help my self...and soon enough the good girl in me was non existent and in its place...was a demon with no conscience."